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on December 17, 2019
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Chapter: Eight
Characters: Clay Moreno, dana sunset, jack westwood, jemma brunswick, marie bellevue, nora rose, rubi whipple, skye alexandria, Thomas Normal
Location: Hospital
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INT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT
From Rubi’s POV, we get the blurry image of people looking over her.
VOICE
I think she’s coming to.
We see the hospital room in full as Rubi opens her eyes. Her friends are here- all of them.
From Rubi’s POV, we get the blurry image of people looking over her.
VOICE
I think she’s coming to.
We see the hospital room in full as Rubi opens her eyes. Her friends are here- all of them.
Wait, if Jack is sitting (topless, why is he topless?) on the cabinet on the left, who is Clay holding? And what are they eating? o_O
That’s thomas over there without a shirt on. The puppy is eating a piece of the door frame.
That doorway behind Clay and puppy looks kind of… …skronked.
Also: PUPPY!
That’s… a very narrow doorway
The perspective is still off because Rubi isn’t fully awake.
It’s the wall that’s airliner. The doorway extends out of frame to the left.
It’s the wall that’s skronked. Thank you autocorrect.
No, that’s a window on the left, the narrow door is behind Clay