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on December 17, 2019
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Chapter: Eight
Characters: Clay Moreno, dana sunset, jack westwood, jemma brunswick, marie bellevue, nora rose, rubi whipple, skye alexandria, Thomas Normal
Location: Hospital
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INT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT
From Rubi’s POV, we get the blurry image of people looking over her.
VOICE
I think she’s coming to.
We see the hospital room in full as Rubi opens her eyes. Her friends are here- all of them.
From Rubi’s POV, we get the blurry image of people looking over her.
VOICE
I think she’s coming to.
We see the hospital room in full as Rubi opens her eyes. Her friends are here- all of them.
Wait, if Jack is sitting (topless, why is he topless?) on the cabinet on the left, who is Clay holding? And what are they eating? o_O
That’s thomas over there without a shirt on. The puppy is eating a piece of the door frame.
That doorway behind Clay and puppy looks kind of… …skronked.
Also: PUPPY!
That’s… a very narrow doorway
It’s the wall that’s airliner. The doorway extends out of frame to the left.
It’s the wall that’s skronked. Thank you autocorrect.
No, that’s a window on the left, the narrow door is behind Clay